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Let me hold this kiss
As the wind blows
Let me hold this kiss
As time slips irreversibly by
Let me hold this kiss

Sands of time slip through your fingertips
Like a child on a beach
Trying to clutch each grain so closely
They all fall in a heap

Each grain will soon be a faded memory
Packed together to make your castle
Time lapping at your moat
So strong and sure standing there
‘Till the tide wipes you from the shore

As we sail in the sea
Let this last piece of us
Last longer then time
A mark of worth on barren earth

Let this kiss hold
When were whispers on the wind
Let this kiss hold
Where time doesn’t exist
Let us hold this kiss
©2007-2009 ~TheCruelMistress
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i wrote this over a year ago. it's about my first love.

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the metaphors.. the imagery..

all is perfect.. ;)

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I'm sane. It's the world that's crazy. ~Kariya Jin (Bleach 108)
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you really are to sweet to me, thank you!

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“Drive on! We'll sweep up the blood later!" – Katharine Hepburn
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:aww:

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I'm sane. It's the world that's crazy. ~Kariya Jin (Bleach 108)
:iconthecruelmistress:
:hug:

--
“Drive on! We'll sweep up the blood later!" – Katharine Hepburn

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